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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by chico, May 26, 2009.

  1. chico

    chico TPF Noob!

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    hello,
    trying this out to see what kind of info i get, this is a pic of my son in his tee-ball game tell me what think thanks , chico


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  2. Jose Cuervo

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    i like it. the look on the your son's face is great. creative work on framing the photo too. i like how it goes behind the bat drawing more attnetion to your son and the swing. what i don't like is the shadow that being cast over half his face (yeah, i know, you can't control that). and i'm not sure if it's the glow effect you added, but nothing seems to be in focus.

    all in all, i think it's cool. you can make a card from it like a baseball card.
     
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    You could dodge his face a little. I agree with the above; it looks soft. If it's the glow effect, eh, I'm not going to step on your creativity, but maybe making it a bit more subtle to maintain apparent sharpness.
     

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