my beginning work!

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  1. Kaiii-LaMa-Ree

    Kaiii-LaMa-Ree TPF Noob!

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    This one is sorta grainy, but I think it kinda adds to the meaning of the photo? what do you think?
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    This one of me I cherish and adore! <3
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    More coming sooooon <3:hail:
     
  2. IamBo

    IamBo TPF Noob!

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    I dig #1 but i really like the color of two, especially the eyes!!
     
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    jedithebomber TPF Noob!

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    #1 The grain is a bit overdone. #2 is great. Although you loose some of the texture in the jacket (that could be my crummy monitor at work tho).
     
  4. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Photos go into the galleries, whether they are beginner's work or not ... The Beginners' Place - from where I moved this thread - is a Q&A-forum, see?
     
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    second ones pretty good, great eyes, only thing I'd suggest is burning your skin a bit to make your eyes pop even more.
     
  6. sabbath999

    sabbath999 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    In the photograph... don't set fire to your skin :)
     
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    sabbath999 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Just a quick tad of PP on this one, just for fun (since it says your photos are OK to edit.
     
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    cameramike TPF Noob!

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    oh but sabbath you're no fun! but really, this is a great photograph the tilt is a little controversial but I think it works.
     
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    sabbath999 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Ok, so you can compare what I actually did, here it is side by side (mine on the left). Lovely picture by the way. Given a bit more time I would also burn in the right side at the top and make that have a bit less glare. But now I gotta go.

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    sabbath999 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Ok, I couldn't help myself, NOW I am leaving:

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