My bf fishing

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  1. virenko

    virenko TPF Noob!

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    Night was falling..
    What do you think? What can I do better?

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    This kind of high kontrast/silhuette is pictures that I nearly almost like. Some of my favorite shots are silhuettes. I really like the idea behind this shot as well, thought there are some small adjustments that I would have done.
    #1. - I would have liked it a tad better if you didn't crop out parts of the pole (word?).
    #2. - The white area behind his ear is somehow a distraction to me. Maybe its only me, but I would have edited that to being all black in PS.

    You did a great job anyway. It's very artsy, and would fit excellent on a fishermans wall. :)
     
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    Nice shot, I would just include the pole next time for better composition.

    Eric
     
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    That's what I am thinking, too: the entire fishing rod, maybe even including the line would have helped.

    But apart from this, I really like your photo here.
     
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    The first comment here is what I think, white spot by the ear annoys me, and I would love to see the whole pole. Other than that, great shot!
     

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