My brother and his girlfriend

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  1. ozzono

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    My brother: David
    My sister-in-law: Olga

    I hope that you like.

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    I like it!
     
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    I don't really like what (i assume) you've done to this. i like the composition but the post procesing leaves alot to be desired. I think his eyes looks very unrealistic. Look like they've been dodged excessively and blurred maybe. They look disjointed from his face. I also don't like the way that their faces are lit up like they have lights beneath their skin. The light doesn';t look very realistic and i suspect its been done on photoshop.
     
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    I think it looks good, the composition is donw well i think and i dont have a problem with the photoshoping thats been done, except maybe for the dark blur around the edges. I think it would look a lot better without it or reduced a bit
     
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    i think the photo is great. the post-proccessing is interesting.
    wonder what effect was added.
     
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    I Really like it:D
     
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    I like it very much as well, and I actually quite like the photoshopping done. The only thing I would change is to not her shirt selectively coloured. (Or whatever that might be in the lower right corner)
     
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    I like this quite a bit. I like the way their expressions are so 'real', not posed. However, I think its a bit of a shame that the girl's face is a bit blurred. Becuase her face already appears a little smaller that the guys face, it kind of pushes her to the background of the photo. But its a beautifull photo none the less! very good.
     
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    I really like it... I like how the girl is pushed to the background & the focus is the guy. The editing on his eyes/face do make it look edited, but in a way that makes his eyes piercing...

    Perhaps I like it because I work for an optical company & it reminds me of one of our ads for contacts ;)
     
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    I like the photo. I think it really draws into his eyes as the main focal point and leaves your sister-in-law as background. Unless you wanted the photo to be mostly about your brother rather than the two of them.

    Hope that made sense.... lovely shot otherwise.

    Pamela
     
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    the only thing that bothers me here are his eyes, they look a bit artificial. everything else is great :)
     
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    Christie Photo No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    "WOAH!" That was my first reaction... and I like that! It's been a while since a portrait made react like that.

    This is certainly a bold departure. And... this is a case where the maker remembered to be different but didn't forget to be good. I have to say this is one of the strongest images I've seen in the forum in any of the galleries.

    -Pete
     

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