my Final Project

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so my theme for my final project in B+W 1 is based off a Cristo and Jean-Cluade exibit i saw recently where they wrapped a bunch of stuff in cloth. well i decided to wrap some every day stuff in tin foil. so here are a few of my photos...C+C welcome

Banana!
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Grapes
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Sneakers
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intersting idea....however:

#1 I think is poorly lit and it might be better if you couldnt see what was holding the banana up.

#2 Better, but a little sloppy. I think if you are going to try and do this kinda thing again, it should be very crisp, neat and well executed.

#3 The tape takes away from it. Also poorly lit and theres a lot of distraction on the backdrop
 
i like the third photo best! the shoes looks good. i think the first photo is kind of missing something. i just don't know what it is.
 
any thing else?? any other ideas for stuff i could wrap in foil??
 

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