my first attempt

[wyogirl]

so... I'm not happy with this result. I did a quick shoot for a friend who has an ice cream truck. I wish I had used more DOF on this one... but she's happy so....

ice cream by Amanda McClure, on Flickr

 

[tirediron]

Not bad for a first go at all! I think a little better control of the highlights (plastic packages & beach ball) and some slight rearrangement would have served you well, but regardless, it's a quality shot

 

[wyogirl]

thanks-- it will do. She had to leave so we were working fast. But it will do the job to show how big each product is.