my first attempts

[JahLynJie]

I haven't done much b&w and this one probably isn't very good. But let me know what you think. I can only get better with your help. Thanks.

I'm thinking it's a bit too dark?
thus far, I haven't edited it in any way. I was a little unsure and thought I'd get your advice.

 

[JahLynJie]

Well, this one is slightly lighter.

I'm not sure it's really any better though. I'm limited by my editing program (I have Photo Exposion and it sucks)