My First C&C post, (film)

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  1. fred0000

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    I am newer to photography so I dont really like sharing a whole lot yet :p
    I did take some pics with my F65 on the weekend mainly to test out a newish lense i got for it, these 2 shots were takin with a Tamron 28-200mm f3.8-5.6 let me know what you guys think.

    #1 (this one is my fav of the 2)
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    #2 (nothing spectacular, handheld kinda impressed me)
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    thanks, any input would be great!
     
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    In both images the main subject is too centered in the frame.

    The bird seems slightly out of focus to me. Looks like the focal point was a little closer to the camera than where the bird is.

    The berries all look out of focus. The light areas to the right of the berries is drawing attention away from the berries.
     

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