my first digital pic any thoughts?

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  1. Happy Hour

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    i shot these out of my bedroom window. I know there nothing special I just wanted some feedback on adjustments I need 2 make or unmake. thanks for any feedback in advance. :thumbdown: :thumbup:
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    Colors quite a bit crazy on both.

    Second one, not too big of a fan. Very busy, but its a first shot so of course its going to be.
     
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    not too bad for the first pic u took, the second one move that lamp out of the way.

    the first one reminds me of this

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  4. Happy Hour

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    LOL that is too funny!:lol: any recomendations on what I can improve on as far as adjustments?
     
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    Looks like you have a good eye and can find subjects. Just the second one has too much clutter in the frame. With the bricks and the grass and the chainlink all going on, it's too busy.
     
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    like first one
     

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