My first HDR try, please rate me hard and tell me how it looks

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  1. BLD_007

    BLD_007 TPF Noob!

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    Picture is of my Fraternity house...



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    What do you think?
     
  2. bazooka

    bazooka No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Whoa.
     
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    They aren't your typical HDR that's for sure. A little overdone some might say, but they look nice. Try to tone it down a bit though. IMO.
     
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    this is exactly what i said lol.

    i think it is way over done imo.
     
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    What do you mean by "not your typical HDR?" This was my first shot at HDR.

    What am I looking for in post processing? I have the 3 pictures +2 0 -2 but after that what do I do to make it your "typical HDR"?

    thanks
     
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    What about this one?

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    I think the first one looks pretty cool, almost like a drawing. But you should work on removing the hallo around the structure.
     
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    defiantly not how I prefer HDR!!

    take the revised version above and edit it some, add some contrast and brightness and play with the levels
     
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    *sighs*
     
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    is my lighting just wrong or composition?
     
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    READ MY RESPONSE. It says what you need to do.

    Here, this is what I was talking about... now I did this real quick, might be too saturated, but you get the idea...
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    try shooting 1 stop apart. The result will be more subtle.
     

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