My First Photos on TPF

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  1. willli

    willli TPF Noob!

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    This are my first photos that I share with you guys coments and critiques are very well acepted. Hope that you like it thanks for watching

    This is a family sunset tooked at the North Shore of Long Island NY
    I named Family Sunset do to all the familys that were sharing that day on the beach it was an amazing day
    Tooked with a Nikon D300 and a 70-300 Vr F4.5-5.6
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    This is the same day same place another angle
    Nikon D300 with a 70-300 VR F4.5-5.6
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    This one is a sunrise tooked on East shore at Long Island NY

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    Cooler_King TPF Noob!

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    I like 2 and 3.

    I can't really critique as I am still learning but I think the low level of detail in the foreground of number 2 (such as the kids striped top) is slightly distracting so I would just bring up the shadows slightly and fill in the detail to give a solid black silouhette. If that makes sense?

    Or crop out the people completely and just have the sailing vessels. That would look cool to. Number 2 is def my favourite.
     
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    Thanks for the comments I really apreciate it
     
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    HikinMike No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Watch your horizons, especially #1, it's tilted a few degrees. ;)
     
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    I like all of them but I choose the last one. The gradient of the sky and the colors in the clouds are just amazing!
     
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    Hey I did not notice before thanks for the observation :thumbup:
     
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    Thanks for the comment you know that is my favorite one to. BTW it was so cold that morning LOL
     
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    There is a tiny water-skier in the distance! Didn't even notice the first time!
     
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    Actually yes is a water skier I thought that it was a nice composition from the guys playing on the sand the father fishing and the water skier doing he's stuffs
     

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