My first portrait shoot

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by RL., Jul 22, 2010.

  1. RL.

    RL. TPF Noob!

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    and it's of myself lol as models are hard to come by

    what do you all think?

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    and "one of those" pics
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    #2 is awesome!!! Great job!
     
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    Very nice job on both of them.

    My only suggestion would be to clone out the white (door?) in the 2nd shot and make it all blue.

    Great job will focusing and DOF on the 2nd one, I love how your one eye just seems to pop.
     
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    those are some good self portraits
     
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    Very good job, second one looks awesome
     
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    not bad.

    the second one i dunno if I like the white in the background or not...it does sumwat add a certain element to the overall photograph.
     

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