My First Portraits

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  1. Trevor

    Trevor TPF Noob!

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    Hey guys. I was feeling like attempting some portraits last night, so here are my first three worth posting :p

    A self portrait;

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    One of my sister;

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    One of my other sister;

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    Neat concepts, good pics, but I'm not a fan of the cropping. First one I think is too high on the chin... I'd have cropped it to the neck. Second one actually works, but the third one I'd have cropped either a bit higher or a bit lower; just having part of the nose is a bit awkward
     
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    I agree with WNK. The focus looks alittle off in the eye on the third one... and if there was a little more light on the pupil it might work alittle better... just kind of blocky in there...
    keep it up!
     
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    Yeah I noticed that in the third photo, bad thing is all of the photos of her were screwed and I didn't want to leave her out. hehe.

    I never noticed but now that you picked out that cropping issue in the third it makes alot of sense and is akward to even me now :D Good point WNK.
     
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    Love the second one. Well done!
     

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