My first post

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by garran, Mar 20, 2008.

  1. garran

    garran TPF Noob!

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    This is my first post ... please be gentle, but honest.


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  2. Eastw77

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    You need to focus on your victims eyes! this image would be so much better. You seem to have focussed on the strands of hair near the right eye.
     
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    yeah its out of focus. I dont care for the crop, but thats a preference, some may like it.
     
  4. garran

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    I've never noticed it before but you're right ... I need to pay more attention to the details as they seem to make or break the picture.

    Thanks
     
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    Yes, focus could be better. I like the concept. I like the crop too. :p
     
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    I love this type of crop, just master the focus a tad
     

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