My first professional studio shoot

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  1. Silver.Winged.Demon

    Silver.Winged.Demon TPF Noob!

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    Model is Keleigh Black. I met a photographer through a buisness card in a coffee shop and had met him at his studio at 8:00pm. The photoshoot was from 8:30pm-4:00am. These are some of the images that I came out with.

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    what do you think?

    Do you think it is a start for something?
     
  2. Silver.Winged.Demon

    Silver.Winged.Demon TPF Noob!

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    bump
     
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    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    Good on you for having such luck to get studio time.

    You have some good images there, interesting angles and a nice model. I think the lighting is spot on. Only nit pick I can give is that I would prefer if she had removed the nipple bars. Personally I don't have a problem with them, but they are adding lines that detract IMO.

    Nice work and thanks for sharing.
     
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    great shots. I think #4 is a little soft. My favorite is #2
     
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    very nice, I like all of them. no complaint here. A shoot from 8:30 pm to 4:30 PM? Is that a usual time or something? How many shots did you take in that 6 hours? I'm just curious.
     
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    nealjpage multi format master in a film geek package

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    I think the nipple bars add something different to it. Leaving them in was the right choice IMO. She's very pretty :lovey:
     

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