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  1. Andrea K

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    do u think it turned out alright for a first time?
    any suggestions?
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    my second official photoshop :D
    is this better than the first, i think so
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    oooh... i like them, both of them...the cat needs abit of cropping and more ears tho i think... but very good work... what camera did you use?
     
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    i used a canon g5
     
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    I prefer the first one :) good job
     
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    i like the second one, but go back and color where the light is going through the stone and hitting the wall too, to make it look like its the only thing thats color. also it may be just me, but it looks like you didn't color but a little more then half of the cats eyes
     
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    2nd was really good...but ooer it would be better if you could reduce the size a bit so we can take it all in by first glance... anyway that's just about the posting... very good work for a first shot...you should see my first ones, I wanna burn them all up right now .. :wink:
     
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    The shadow on the 2nd one would have also have an orangeish tint on it. Just a suggestion to make it more realistic.
     
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    i made a new one with the shadow orange as well

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    The cat is nice but I think the effect would be better if you warmed up the black - just a touch of sepia. The blue eyes with the neutral black leans to far to the cold. Cat's are warm. Try it and see ;-)
     
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    That canon G5 does a fantastic job. Your photoshop isn't bad either. The orange shadow makes the 2nd shot more abstract because there's no such thing in reality as an orange shadow.
     
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    Great shots! I love the 2nd one especially with the orange shadow and tighter crop.

    I also think the cat needs a tighter crop.
     

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