Petraio Prime
TPF Noob!
- Joined
- May 28, 2010
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- Location
- Ohio
- Can others edit my Photos
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1. She looks really uncomfortable and like everyone else my attention went to the train first.
2. I think this could have been a good shot had so much cleavage not been showing and you left her legs on ( and I have this SAME problem).
3. I actually like this one okay but it would have been better had you not zoomed in so close.
I do hope the nasty people on here do not stop you from seeking advice and C&C. The only way to improve is to take pictures and figure out what you can do better next time. While there may be some people who can pick up a camera and just naturally shoot fantastic photos, that is not most. Most have to shoot and learn along the way so keep it up! Oh and next time just don't post pictures like number 2 for C&C (or anywhere)
In offering criticism, one must look for signs that there is some sensitivity on the part of the photographer to certain basics of composition, lighting, etc. You also look for signs the criticism would be understood. I see no reason to expect the author of these to develop a great deal further. I just cannot imagine it. There are sometimes weaknesses mixed in with strengths in anyone's work. I see no strengths here at all, no comprehension of how a two-dimensional image works. There is no sense of space, no sense of proportion, of lighting, at all.
There is no understanding of 'order', no organization. Everything is just jumbled together.
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