My first wedding.....Thoughts????

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  1. uberben

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    I have been planning to start doing weddings for the last year and this summer I booked three of them with some really great couples. I have done all the engagement photos already. This wedding was from 3 weeks ago. I have about 200 of what I would call keepers, but these are a couple of my favorites.....

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    Nice work, I don't know but 1 is kinda cool:D
     
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    Nice work. I think I also like #1 the best. I would probably crop it a little, so that the couple is more tightly framed. I think eliminating the black on either side would make the couple stand out more. Maybe a little more contrast in #12 to bring out the couple, too. Looks like you are starting off well!
     
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    I really like #1, but personally, I would like to see the black cropped off as already mentioned, I also would like to see the both of them as a complete sillhouette, no detail.

    #5, would be better if the glass was turned a little more so their names were more easily and wholly seen.

    They are a cute couple and look quite young. Nice photos.
     
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    Nice. I like you B&G shots. Watch the background. You are also a little tight on a few, but over all, very well done.
     

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