My First Wedding

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  1. fuzzydice

    fuzzydice TPF Noob!

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    I was wondering if I could get some feedback on these shots and other critiques on how I can get better.

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  2. Alison

    Alison Swiss Army Friend Supporting Member

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    Excellent! #3 & #4 really stand out to me. You've got a great style and a good ability to capture the emotion.
     
  3. elsaspet

    elsaspet TPF Noob!

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    I think they look great! Especially the black and whites........really beautiful!
     
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    thanks. i appreciate it.
     
  5. ShutteredEye

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    4, 5 & 6 are well done especially #4.

    Here are my thoughts on the rest:
    1. Looks like bit of camera shake, or soft focus. Probably you weren't allowed any flash during the ceremony, so maybe a faster lense is the only answer here. Also, I would rather have seen them standing on something and not included the lights over thier heads.

    2. Kind of snap-shotty here. Light isn't controlled very well, the grooms face is halfway in shadow, and the background is a tad cluttered.

    3. I like this shot alot, except--oh my GOD!! They don't have any legs!! :mrgreen: If this is their first dance, full length would have been really important here. Pull back a bit and this would have been a great shot.

    Good job for your first wedding!!
     
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    one and four are my faves....
     
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    Welcome to the forum....nice work
     
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    Great pics!
     
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    i really liked 3,4 and 5
     
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    I LOVE the flower girl pic! The only suggestions I might have is crop out the overhead lights on the first pic and crop in to 1/2 torso on the dancing shot since you didn't get their feet - other than that everything is fantastic!
     
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    wonderful!! I love the one with a little girl!!!
     
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    Really love 3 and 4.
     

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