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Discussion in 'Nature & Wildlife' started by stone_family3, Sep 20, 2009.

  1. stone_family3

    stone_family3 TPF Noob!

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    I have taken these with a Nikon L18, they are unedited. Honest opinions please.

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  2. bigtwinky

    bigtwinky No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    #1 it seems out of focus and the angle / composition doesnt do anything to enhance the subject. What were you trying to achieve?

    #2 same as #1 above for the focus. Cutting part of the flower didn't work in this image. The petals are cut as well. The image leaves a sense of being incomplete.


    #3 better in composition, but still a tad too centered. Look up the rule of thirds and how it can enhance a photo. I would of liked to have seen the bee at a more side view angle instead of top down. Not always that easy, I know, I'm just saying :)

    #4 Probably the best of the bunch, but Idont like how its centered composed. Again, check out the rules of thirds. You are also a bit zoomed out in this one. The leaf is somewhat distracting.

    Keep on shooting! :)
     
  3. stone_family3

    stone_family3 TPF Noob!

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    Thanks, this is not my fav camera out of all the ones I've had. I'm still trying to get the hang of it. My parents bought a nikon to replace my p&s fujifilm.
     
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    DigitalScape TPF Noob!

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    Bigtwinky hit the C&C highlights - just keep learning and keep shooting.
     

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