My girlfriend

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  1. Bibos

    Bibos TPF Noob!

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    Hi, after looking through a few of the photos I did on our holiday in Greece in August this year I decided to post two I like pretty much. Comments and critique very much appreciated.

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  2. jocose

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    Umm, well, my comment is this: When y'all break up, can you give her my number? :drool:


    I do like the angle in the first pic, BTW.
     
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    Hi, Bibos.

    I'll offer one thought from a "portrait" perspective: When I view the first image, my eye doesn't know where to go. The shear size and color of the ATV overwhelms your subject. It's a great prop, though. Have you tried bringing down the tones of the lower 2/3 of the composition? I think it may help guide the viewers attention to your very lovely girfriend's face.

    I think there's a bit of the same concern in the second image too. Maybe a vignette would work here. Just a thought.

    Beautiful girls in Austria, I see.

    Pete
     
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    I agree with Christie, the first photo would look much better if you cropped it just under the head light.
     
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    Good stomach! Nice holiday snaps.

    Where about's in Greece did you go?
     
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    I'd hit it.
     
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    very inappropriate comment!
     
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    I thought we were supposed to be commenting on PHOTOS here.....
     
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    Very beautiful, shots and girlfriend, well done :)
     
  12. bace

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    So whoever gave me the negative rep point on this thing, I hope they gave one to Jocose too.

    We said the same thing I just used less words.

    My comment was totally meant as a compliment.

    The girl is gorgeous. Bibos is a lucky dude.
     

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