My grandma

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  1. Daki_One

    Daki_One TPF Noob!

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    I've been trying to capture more portraits and people especially in black and white. I took this photo and i liked the composition and all but felt like the image was too dull. critiques are welcome.

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  2. dcclark

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    I'd get in closer -- head, shoulders, and maybe her arms and hands -- her legs and feet are not doing a lot of the composition. That's my first idea, at any rate.
     
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    Jeff Canes No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    i also agree with tighter, how are the tones they look light on my labtop?
     
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    Yes, get closer. And watch what's in the background. If you crop out the blind (or whatever it is) on the left wall that would help this picture.
     
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    thanks everyone for the input.
     

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