My guitar

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  1. Brently

    Brently TPF Noob!

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    This is the best i can do for a macro with my Sony P72, I tried doing some other macro shots today but it wouldnt focus. This shot was taken a few months ago when i first got the guitar.

    This is the Critique board, so rip me apart if you wish to do so.

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  2. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    The composition here is great - I just love it. But it's a tad too bright, and a tad too soft. Nothing that can't be fixed, since you have an excellent eye for what works with this type of macro. Try it again! I'd love to see this with better contrast and sharper. :D

    Here's hoping you play rock on that thing. :wink:
     
  3. Wilson

    Wilson TPF Noob!

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    I don't have enough experience to give you a serious critique but I know what I like. That's a nice shot and an even nicer Guitar, I've got a Carvin myself.


    ....For the Filter fans

    "That's why I say hey man nice shot
    what a good shot man"
     
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    hobbes28 Incredible Supporting Member

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    I have to agree with terri. I think if it was a little darker and not so soft it would be perfect.
     
  5. Tonks

    Tonks TPF Noob!

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    It's pretty soft, but the effort is certainly there. Work on your lighting a bit, and work on your focus, and you'll have yourself a vey nice shot :)
     

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