My lady.

Discussion in 'People Photography' started by Foques, Nov 20, 2009.

  1. Foques

    Foques TPF Noob!

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    Thoughts?
    Suggestions?

    (i know the nose blends in.. that was the idea)
     
  2. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    What's with the out of focus thing in the background? It's rather distracting.
     
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    Foques TPF Noob!

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    thanks mike. I'll nuke out of there tonight.
     
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    the blacks and whites look a little flat to me and the object in the background is distracting. Don't really like that white vignette on their either especially on the bottom left portion of the photo.
     
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    She has pretty eyes. I like her eyes.
     
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    I agree about the vignette
     
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    camz No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    hmmm personally I like it. I think Mike is right about the hardware on the back there. If you're going with the vintage look I think the vignette looks nice, it's the gadget on the back and her clothes that somewhat contradict the theme though.
     
  8. Foques

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    thanks a bunch everyone. I didn't make it home over the weekend.. so no edit yet.

    Vignette was kind of needed. there was more gadgetry.. and, truly, I did not notice the phone in the background. My fault.
     

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