My little man, 2 for C&C please

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  1. Jifferz

    Jifferz TPF Noob!

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    I know I accidently cut off some appendages but other than that, how does everything else look....exposure, focus etc? And is it just me or does in #2, his head look too big for his body? Thanks!

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  2. DanFinePhotography

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    yes, you might try to use a little less wide angle. The exposure looks pretty sweet however
     
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    Thanks for your feedback DanFine, I appreciate it.
    I shot these at f8, which I thought would work but I guess because his body extends behind him at an angle, it makes it look off.

    Anyone else have any CC on these?
     
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    These look a bit underexposed to me. I agree too that a slightly longer focal length would make him look better.
     
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    mwcfarms No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Im with Derrell both look underexposed.
     

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