My morning view

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  1. sparc872

    sparc872 TPF Noob!

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  2. Firelance

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    mmm, try to concentrate on a subject. This picture is just a bunch of trees, what if you would pick out the tallest (for example), and try to shoot it on a different way... And in this case, there's hardly any color, so go bw instead.
     
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    i agree... this shot lacks a focus of any sort... my eye just wanders around the picture looking for something to focus in on... maybe if there was something in the shot that was distinct, like a bunch of bare trees & 1 lone evergreen... that sorta thing...

    keep at it... you've got some interesting ideas :)
     
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    My eye wants to pan backwards and see more of the land when I look at this shot. The concept is cool but I think it lacks mood, probably the result of the lacking subject.
     

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