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    Fifthphotography TPF Noob!

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  2. 786soul

    786soul TPF Noob!

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    I like it! Simple yet elegant. I'd try to be more formal in the writing however; places like the About section seem too informal.
     
  3. Fifthphotography

    Fifthphotography TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for the Input. I was going for a very informal feel. If it doesn't work out I'll change it.
     
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    It is impossible to be able to click the link for your pricing. It took me 10 tries, the menu collapses. Was it just me?
     
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    Not only is some of the writing a bit more informal than I'd suggest, but there are a lot of grammatical errors in the writing.
     
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    +1 on the grammar check... your vs you're, missing commas, etc

    Nice layout, but my computer is about 6 years old, so it's a bit sluggish loading.
     

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