My niece Holly

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  1. CurtPick

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    Hi, this is my first post here and would like everyones opinion on this shot.
    Used Canon 10D, 50mm 1.8, Flash. I think it came out pretty good considering the available light ! Your comment are more than welcome , good or bad !

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    Your Niece is hot!! :lol: (couldn't help myself)

    I like the lighting, image sharpness and DOF. :)
     
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    Did you use the built in flash or an add on?

    Also when posting pictures of hot chicks, be sure and include their phone number. :D
     
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    Ask for Holly ! :lol:
     
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    Used the 380EX external with mount, bounced and diffused
     
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    huh! very nice! but I'd prefer more focus on her right eye rather than on nose and teeth:) her right eye seems to be a little blurred
     
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    I would shoot that again with the following changes:

    More DOF so that her right eye and her left ear-ring are all in focus

    Loose the branded shirt (no, I don't mean show her wearing just a bra, but if you insist, don't let me stop you)
     
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    i agree with all of the above
     

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