My niece

Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by lostcase_gib, Jan 31, 2008.

  1. lostcase_gib

    lostcase_gib TPF Noob!

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    Well here is my first propert attempt at B&W.

    Taken with a canon s5 is (Semi-SLR)

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    Sirene TPF Noob!

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    Ohh makes me sleepy :)
     
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    lostcase_gib TPF Noob!

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    thinking of entering this one in local competitions, so if anyone could critique it and tell me whats wrong to improve on it i would much appreciate it!
     
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    Please excuse what may seem like brutality but, IMO, this is not contest material.
    The image is underexposed and muddy. The skin surface shows some pimpling which is too obvious. There is little or no feeling of contact with the baby, the eyes are completely dark.

    The background is very distracting and the crop is much too lose.

    Sorry.
     
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    I don't care about the skin, but I have to agree with The Traveler on the exposure, contact, eyes, crop, background.




    pascal
     
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    a bit noisy on top of all teh critque above.

    I like the picture tho, just not contest material i think.
     
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    lostcase_gib TPF Noob!

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    Thanks for your help guys!

    Am new at this and wouldnt know where to start!

    Will look around for better if not i will skip comp for a while.
     

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