My Niece

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  1. christinagbee31

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    I would really like comments/suggestions/criticism on this picture please. I know her arms are cut off and wish I had paid more attention to that.

    This was taken in manual, settings were ISO 200, F 3.2, SS 1/250 taken with my 50mm 1.4 lens.

    Dulanie....

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    Anyone?? Pretty please??
     
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    I think the severing of limbs added more character to the composition. I like it.
    The only thing I would have changed is the harsh shadow/light line on her face.
     
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    Thanks!!

    Do you know how I would get rid of the shadow/light line in her face?
     
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    If you mean in shooting, I always carry a white poster board for that. It's reflective enough to give nice even lighting.
    If you mean in post-processing, a little dodging and burning, then some healing brush, and some clone stamp, followed by more healing brush.
    There's no easy formula, just learn the tools and use them as you see fit.
    Here's a quick attempt:

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    Thank you so much for your input!
     
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    No prob! I just realized that I missed her nose, but you get the idea.
     
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