My pics yet again.

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by mukti, Sep 22, 2008.

  1. mukti

    mukti TPF Noob!

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    Hi guys!

    Since my pics didn\t show up in my last post,I ...am posting them again for feedback..(thanks for the help Dratom):)

    Please let me know what you guys think.


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  2. MAGIC PHOTO

    MAGIC PHOTO TPF Noob!

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    wooow
    nice shoot
    really
    nomber 1 is my fav ...
     
  3. Alex_B

    Alex_B No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    in number one the composition looks too random for me, although the light is good.

    my favourite is clearly number 3 (nice perspective, almost abstract), followed by number 2.
     
  4. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    I like the abstractness and reduction to lines and shapes and colours in 4. Very nice!

    However I am not too fond of your composition for the flowers in 1, too much is being cut off, and the light is extremely yellow. It must have been lamp light. Was it?

    The background in Photo 2 is very busy with part of the vendor's face (mildly blurred) showing between the puppets, and a car on the left ... would have been nicer if it had been more reduced to the subject (puppets).

    3 is really interesting. Like Alex is saying: it is ALMOST abstract, though it is not. I personally would have cropped it somewhat differently, I think, but since it is your photo... It's just that I find the bottom (blurred) hand distracting. That's all.
     
  5. mukti

    mukti TPF Noob!

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    Great observations.the next time I take pics,will keep this in mind..specially your comment on pic3..thanks
     
  6. mukti

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    Yeah ALex,I agree with you on that one..I think ,now, that the composition could be stronger.Thanks.
     
  7. mukti

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    Thank you
     
  8. DRATOM

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    Hey Mukti you got it now! Now I like #3, but i agree with LaFoto about cropping out the blurred hand! Nice shooting
     
  9. mukti

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    Yes Dratom.Thanks to you...I've posted some more,check 'em out.

    And yeah I agree with LaFoto too:)
     

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