My Pictures. C&C if you wish =]

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  1. cviste

    cviste TPF Noob!

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    iknow the framing isnt correct.
    butive learned how to frame just recently.
    so dont mind it. thanks.

    dirty sensor >:l
    my dadsmokes alot..
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    if you care to see larger sizes of these pictures. please visitmy photo stream.
    www.flickr.com/christianbutardo
     
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    cviste TPF Noob!

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    any c&c?
     
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    well..cute kid, nice aperture in the 1st one. the close-up of your father is an effective, 'edgy' experiment. i like the colors (the fence). you got great light over in california. what's your real interest ? portrait, social documentary or more location pictures?
     
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    You've posted more images than I'm able to offer individual critique on at this time (ideally five or less is a good number). Therefore, I'll offer some general comments. Overall, the images are very good technically; you've got good exposure, and some nice B&W conversions, but I get the impression that you're not really sure what you want to shoot. What I would suggest is do a series of photoshoots, one of people, one of nature, one of urban scenes, and post the best 3-5 of each, in turn, here for critique. This will help you to get a feeling for your personal niche, and also provide you better critique as it will based on similar images.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your milage may vary.

    ~John
     
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    john, hey my names chris.
    haha you got me right on point..
    i have no clue what type of photgraphy im goign to get into.
    people nature. idkk yet.
    and you read my mind and intentions already.

    my uncle has a wedding gig soon, and i wanted to get a zoom lens tamron18-200mm to be effective in getting shots with him.
    (this would be my people area)

    and then in a couple weeks im going camping i believe.
    and that wllgive me a chance to do that. jsut showing what ive done.


    thanks to both of you for giving positive feedback.
    negative is welcoem aslo, it helps honestly.


    john what do you shoot withm, whats your area of photog?
     
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    i love the shots.. im just starting too. trying to get a hold of a new lens
     
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    ^^thats cool!
     
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    more shots to be posted later today/tonight :]
     

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