'My Princess' C&C would be greatly appreciated

[Mazzarooney]

I am trying my hand at portrait shots using my daughter as a guinea pig!!

Obviously I have done some editing to the original shot.

Thanks for looking.

 

[Sbuxo]

I like everything about it except the extreme yellow tone.'
Future model, fsho. so cute

kiss

 

[iAstonish]

Like the framing and the pose, but like the above poster said the yellow-tone is a bit distracting. Try processing it a bit with some auto white balancing.

 

[Mazzarooney]

I like everything about it except the extreme yellow tone.'
Future model, fsho. so cute

kiss

Thank you, I have been playing around with Photoshop and tryed to follow a retro look tutorial.

Do you prefer the b&w image?

 

[Sbuxo]

Yes, I like the B&W much more! It suits it a lot better. But it's still too gray, how do you like this edit?

I also found that there are "raccoon" shadows by her eyes, you might want to edit that out a bit. I couldn't because I'm not on my laptop that has photoshop so I just used photobucket to adjust contrast.

x

 

[Aggressor]

I prefer the color. It reminds me of crossprocessed film. The B&W brings out the softness in the image, making her looking a tad OOF.