My sister FFA Sr. pictures

[kelli_anne]

Hello everyone, thank you for taking the time to look! These are some of the photos I took for my sister in her FFA official dress FFA (future farmers of America) These have not been edited, please let me know what you think. I know a lot of them need to be sharpen, and then lighting is not the greatest, and I should have used fill lighting, But let me know what you think

1. I am going to crop out the bottom and make it a little more leave, asides from that what else do you think?

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3.I need to fix her hair and that really tall grass

4.

5. I need to clean up her makeup around her eye

6. Nail polish?!?!?!

7. I really like this photo but i needs to be sharper

 

[PerfectlyFlawed]

i really like 4 the best.

still a noob, so cant offer too much on my end.

the only things i noticed off the bat were the things you had stated above the pictures.
nail polish chipped, out of focus, not sharp enough.. tall grass.. etc. I think you hit it on the nose.

pretty good composition. Imo.

 

[Darkhunter139]

I don't think the composition is very good for any of then honestly. And as you mentioned, not very sharp, bad lighting and blown out skies.

1. not showing up for me

2. Best composition of the set but I think you should have got her whole right shoulder in the picture.

7. Her hair is right up against the edge of the photo

I think all of your shots should be zoomed out a bit more.

 

[kelli_anne]

Thank you both for your input!! keep it coming

 

[Tulsa]

Sounds like you know what you needed to do, why didn't you do it? And why not edit before you post them?

 

[kows]

I think number 4 is the best. Her expression is the best out of them all.

maybe take some more and try out a wider variety of expressions?