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  1. Scurra

    Scurra TPF Noob!

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    Hi folks,

    I finally got round to getting another scanner, so I can put a few pics up... I'm not going to stick this in the critique gallery because I know the lighting is poor, and the scan quality is a little dubious... so it's wound up here instead:

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    comments however are welcome.
     
  2. Scurra

    Scurra TPF Noob!

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    Oh and here are two more from the same series.... my first roll of portrait shots ever! I need to get better lighting thats for sure:

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    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    Well...looks like you already know what to work on! I'd also say she needs more of an expression on her face...she looks kinda...blank.
     
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    Haha thats the norm for my sister to be fair... i'm working on getting some other people to model for me.

    Hopefully the more people i shoot the better i'll get :s
     
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    this is a typical sister facial response to brother asking her to pose. :wink:
     
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    wow! She looks almost exactly like my friend! YAY! real tweens!
     
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    To me her eyes have the expression. You are definitely on to some thing here. Generally, flowers seem contrived. In this case they work well.

    I suggest a white foamcore or posterboard bounce.
     
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    The first shot is great, maybe a bit o bright/contrast in PS but other than that keep em coming.

    Shooting outside in full sun is rough, isn't it? I just finished shooting an outdoor wedding in Mississippi. Haze and bright light...ouch!!!! I had to shoot three or four shots per shot because everyone kept squinting. lol. Needless to say it will be the last time I use film at a wedding. :lol:
     
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    Actually, I REALLY like the second shot. Her look is perplexing. You can read lots of emotions into it.
     

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