my vision on life

T8TERS

TPF Noob!
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1.
Hidden supports
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2.
Abandoned
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3.
My first home
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4.
Just as the drop
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tell me what you think im open for any criticism
 
oh yes ha sorry about that someone told me i had them in the wrong section and to place them here im kinds new to this whole tpf thing
 
#1-focus seems off, lights are very distracting

#2-I like this one but it seems that something more interesting could have been done with composition. Saved by a cool subject.

#3-Best of the bunch

#4-railing straight across=kinda boring, there is more you could do with this. If you have the lens for it, get in tight, shoot down the rail with very shallow DOF

Very nice effort though
 
ah yes thankyou on that last one it came bad when i tried to scan it into my computer but with a clear shot i was trying to focus on the drop in the middle of the railing, but i will take that into effect and give it another try thankyou much!
 

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