My wife-C&C please

[wildmaven]

Jm has some great tips. Also, you've burned out the top of her head so that her hair is overblown. What light was shining right on the top of her head?

 

[ryyback]

Thanks Jm for the tips-
When I was shooting these pictures, basically I was just playing around, no posing no nothing, just getting in some practice with my camera. I will try again with the same subject in the same spot in a couple of days, or at least before the tree comes down-

The burned out hair is probably from the 3 light fixture right her head. I will get her to move to the other side of the tree for the next shots, or move the lights up and not shining down.