My Wife Maternity Shoot: Please C&C

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  1. Cooler_King

    Cooler_King TPF Noob!

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    Camera: Oly e500
    Lens: Zuiko 14-45
    Lighting: £3 Ikea Desk Lamp and window light (but I have 'used' light before so this was an experiment)
    Model: My wife
    PP: Minimal except cropping and some fill light (or B&W)
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    Comments: Please ignore the sharpness as these photos have been run through Facebook and then uploaded to ImageShack. They are much sharper on my hard drive.

    OK...let the blood bath commence. I make no apologies for cheesiness :lol:

    45mm, F 5.6, 1/30, ISO 400
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    24mm, F 4.2, 1/60, ISO 400
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    45mm, F 5.6, 1/13, ISO 200
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    22mm, F 5.6, 1/40, ISO 400
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    20mm, F 5.6, 1/40, ISO 400
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    27mm, F 4.4, 1/20, ISO 200
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    Thanks for looking. :thumbup:
     
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    i see no pictures
     
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    I see no pictures. D:
     
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    Fixed. ;) Damn image shack direct link!
     
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    well i so no cheesines and these pictures are great for memories. good job!
     
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    My favorite is the last one (6).
     
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    I like #3 and 6 cause of composition and softer lighting. The others seem a bit "snapshotish" and the lighting/shadows are a bit too harsh

    Congrats on the incoming family. My wife just gave birth 11 weeks ago. It's a wonderful time :)
     
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    i like them. nice shots. my sister is pregnant and wants me to take some shots of her this month (due in Feb) congrats to you both! post baby pictures when arrived!

    i think number 2 and 5 are slightly overexposed though. otherwise i like them.
     
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    I hate to cc these due to your sentiment, BUT they look more like snapshots taken with a p&s. The composition in a few are just ok and the lighting and dof is off in all of them. Here is a hint, work on one shot and post that instead of six. Stick with it!!!:thumbup:
     
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    I appreciate any C&C but how could the focus be off in all of them?

    2 of the images have the focused placed exactly where I wanted it and where is the error in 6?

    I am not defending but asking exactly what you are seeing.
     
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    Does your wife know you posted these on the internet...man you are brave.
    I like the last one, that has a cool concept and is well executed.
     
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    [FONT=Arial, verdana, helvetica, geneva, comic sans]Depth of Field[/FONT]
    [FONT=Arial, verdana, helvetica, geneva, comic sans]The zone of acceptable sharpness in front of and behind the subject on which the lens is focused; extends approx. one-third in front of and two thirds behind the in-focus subject; dependent on three factors: aperture, focal length, and focused distance; the wider the aperture, the longer the focal length, and the closer the focused distance, the less the depth of field, and vice versa; in comparison to a normal lens, wideangle lenses have inherently more depth of field at each f-number and telephoto lenses have less.[/FONT]
    [FONT=Arial, verdana, helvetica, geneva, comic sans]Since this element is very important, another simpler way to explain is the amount of distance between the nearest and farthest objects that appear in acceptably sharp focus in a photograph. Depth of field depends on the lens opening, the focal length of the lens, and the distance from the lens to the subject or can explain as in simpler term as [/FONT][FONT=Arial, verdana, helvetica, geneva, comic sans]the zone of sharpest focus in front of, behind, and around the subject on which the lens is focused; can be previewed in the camera - very handy for critical work. Relating article in this site: [/FONT][FONT=Arial, verdana, helvetica, geneva, comic sans]Depth of field[/FONT][FONT=Arial, verdana, helvetica, geneva, comic sans].[/FONT]
     

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