My Wife - Practice

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  1. CRUMB

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    My 3.2 Meg old school camera.

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    That's a really nice shot, but what happened to her pupils??

    Could just be my screen, but they look green?
     
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    Thats pretty good! Her pupils are a little wacky thoguh...


    Nice job for a 3.2 meg camera lol
     
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    mine shows green as well ...



    I really like the image though.
     
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    i agree with lasershot. that's a really good picture for 3.2. her pupils, though, maybe it was supposed to look that way, but they look like jelly or something. lol. very beautiful shot, though. you have a nice looking wife
     
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    Yeah, them is some effed pupils HAHA.
    But regardless, that is a very nice shot. Great work.
     
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    I agree about the eyes....also the hand coming up is a little off to me. looks like she's about to punch herself in the jaw. I like the lighting and the coloring (but not the selective coloring in the eyes).

    cheers
     
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    Great shot, just to see, i put the photo in PS and turned the whole thing grey scale....and the eyes look alot better.

    nice pose though, very well done :)
     
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    I agree. Maybe you were going for the agressive pose, but this really looks like she's about to punch herself.
    but a very pretty model and a good try! :thumbup:





    pascal
     
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    looks like selective coloring gone wrong. if in fact thats what happened, make sure you "erase" the color from the pupils. Nice shot.
     
  11. CRUMB

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    Thnx for the critique, I rushed the PS when I shouldn't have. I had a great subject, but rushed the tweeking. Will do better in the future, promise. The puplis, great call. Thnx everyone, I'll step it up next round ;)

    C
     
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    Im going to assume this started life as a color image... How was it in color?
     

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