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Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by taknbyd, May 17, 2009.

  1. taknbyd

    taknbyd TPF Noob!

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    Practicing on the wife again... Very new to photography...CC welcome..[​IMG]
     
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    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    It's not so easy to give C&C when you personalize it with a title like 'My Wife' or 'My (fill in the blank).

    With that, the comment I am willing to make is that IMO, it is better to have some white on either side of the eye, even just a sliver.

    Oh yeah, she is quite pretty.
     
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    taknbyd TPF Noob!

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    Thank you for your comment.. I toke this pic a little before I heard your advice about it a couple days ago about the eyes.. I will make sure to keep that in mind.. Thank you!!!!!
     
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    I have seen for lot of models doing this. Can you please tell me the reason?
     
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    sunlou TPF Noob!

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    I am a beginner too, so nothing very technical,

    I like the lighting and hair movement

    the only thing I am sure in that picture is the posture, I would have preferred her shoulders a little more oppened, athough she is smiling, I feel she is closed...


    that is my humble 2 cent ( feel free to contradict me if you don't agree, critic about my critique is very welcomed ;)
     
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    paigegreen916 TPF Noob!

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    personally, i would have moved her more to the right of the frame and stopped down a bit more, but other than that, its a very nice image and you have a very lovely wife!
     

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