My wife's pregnant belly...C&C please.

[Clintopher]

I'm really happy with this picture but would love to hear any ways I could improve. Comments welcome. Thanks in advance.

50mm
f 1.8
1/1000
ISO 200
Lighting from window only

 

[JSD]

That is a very lovely photo, very intimate. Not that I am any great expert but I cant see any way to improve it other than to have done it in color- but thats just because I love color. Nice shot.

 

[transformed]

lovely! The robe in the foreground you might have pulled back just a bit. It takes up about a 1/3 of the focal area and so detracts just a bit.

 

[JSD]

lovely! The robe in the foreground you might have pulled back just a bit. It takes up about a 1/3 of the focal area and so detracts just a bit.

Good point but I also think the robe lends an element of privacy to what is a somewhat personal, revealing moment.

 

[mom2eight]

She will cherish this shot. Congrats on the new baby. Tell your wife she is very luck to have such a cute little belly. I could have never done a shot like this unless someone was REALLY good at cloning stretch marks! LOL