Nap Time

[ShutteredEye]

I posted this to a Photo Theme thread, but I'd like a little criticism on it.

Basically my daughter fell asleep while watching TV on the couch, she pulled the pillow up to the side of her face.

Comments welcomed.

 

[siv]

i like the color tones of the photo, though i wish i could see a little more of her face (obviously not possible in this situation though)

 

[Cuervo79]

As Siv said, I like the tones of the photo, what I find it lacs is more detail in the pillows, with a smaller aperture you could have focused on the pillows, and also get the details of the face.
As I se it, the smoothness of the face would need something to contrast to, that would be the texture of the pillows.