c.cloudwalker
TPF Noob!
- Joined
- Jun 15, 2009
- Messages
- 5,394
- Reaction score
- 405
- Location
- An American in Europe
- Can others edit my Photos
- Photos NOT OK to edit
Not a big fan of make-up in general so I'll skip that part except to say that it seems to fit the photos quite well.
#1 is my favorite. Composition, tones, lighting are all good.
#2 would be very nice too except for the line-like shadow to the left (out left) of her nose which annoys me.
#3 would be very nice too if she was more to the left so that the bedsheet lol: sorry, I don't know what else to call it) was not cropped on the right. It would be nice to also have a little bit more space at the top for the same reason. And, I would tone down the bra thing a bit. In this image I just love the tones and texture of the bedsheet. It looks almost like a painting. I would however edit out the fine white area just to the right of her wrist which make me think of loose threads.
#4 I would tone down the bra thing quite a bit. It is so light that my eyes have a hard time going anywhere but her chest area which I doubt is the subject of the image.
#1 is my favorite. Composition, tones, lighting are all good.
#2 would be very nice too except for the line-like shadow to the left (out left) of her nose which annoys me.
#3 would be very nice too if she was more to the left so that the bedsheet lol: sorry, I don't know what else to call it) was not cropped on the right. It would be nice to also have a little bit more space at the top for the same reason. And, I would tone down the bra thing a bit. In this image I just love the tones and texture of the bedsheet. It looks almost like a painting. I would however edit out the fine white area just to the right of her wrist which make me think of loose threads.
#4 I would tone down the bra thing quite a bit. It is so light that my eyes have a hard time going anywhere but her chest area which I doubt is the subject of the image.