Natalie in my home studio. nws

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  1. jcolman

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    in the second to last one, she looks SOOOOO tense and uncomfortable and as though she's straining to keep her head up
     
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    She was straining a bit. I'll look at some of my other takes on this shot.
     
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    I like the third one alot althoug maybe it would have been better if both eyes were in focus
    they are a nice set though
     
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    I love the lighting and color.
     
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    #4 is awkward, there is also some strange PP on her bottom lip to her chin. Howver I really like #1 and #3
     
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    A new and improved version of the first shot.

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    Love the new edit of the first picture and how did you edit the 3rd picture! it's my favorite!!! (i do agree though, it would have been great if both eyes were in focus! xoxoxooxox
     
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    I like the pose in #2, very romanesque. 3 is pretty good too.
     
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    Here's a tutorial on the effect used in the third pic. I'll redo the pic and get both her eyes in focus.

    http://www.tiltshiftphotography.net/photoshop-tutorial.php
     

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