need critique

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  1. jdphotographer2091

    jdphotographer2091 TPF Noob!

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    i just started getting serious about photography.
    Im only 16 and i am looking for critique to make my work better.
    Dont hesitate to be harsh.

    thanks



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  2. IndieMe

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    I like 6 and 3 the best,

    The skin colour looks a little un - natural like there's too much contrast.

    All in all good job! :mrgreen:
     
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    a little underexposed, and the lighting is weird, casting that odd shadow behind the kid.

    You're not doin too badly though...keep up the good work.
     
  4. jdphotographer2091

    jdphotographer2091 TPF Noob!

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    how would i fix the shadow behind him
     

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