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  1. Tom3

    Tom3 TPF Noob!

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    Hi,
    I just upgraded to a Nikon D200 and we were at Union Station in LA where I decided to play with my new toy.

    Here's a pic I took; I removed a person from the background with photoshop and then adjusted the picture with lightroom.

    I am trying to learn more about composition, so I welcome any feedback and criticism.


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  2. tirediron

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    Interesting idea; I'd like to see it just a bit brighter on the seats image right though.
     
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    unfortunately that side was naturally pretty dark on the original picture :) so if I try to adjust it, it's going to come washed out
     
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    Understand, just giving you my thoughts on the image.
     
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    I don't think all the black helps. I would crop off a lot of the top, some on the bottom and some on the right. This would put her more off center and looking into the photo. - TF
     
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    ok, I'll try that and repost it
     

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