Need some critique and advice

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  1. dandiaz

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    One of my friend ask me for some decent photo which Im proud to show off. No theme required. Unlimited tries to publish in a small University pamplet.
    I need some critique to improve the photos and the watermark as well (it's my first time putting one)

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    Thanks a Lot!:mrgreen:
     
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    Wow, the selective coloring in #5 works very, very nicely ... good job with that one.

    #1 doesn't work for me ... I think I want the children a little closer; but, then again, I don't know what you were looking to do.

    The cats are mangy and look awesome, shows the real "cat attitude" ...

    Love the perspective in #4

    Great shots.
     
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    Thanks for the quick reply! I was looking an adventurous feel.\

    Taken with a D70s too.
     
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    NICE!! I don't feel so outdated now! *lol* all these other big burly guys with their fancy-schmancy D300s, D700 and D3X all showing off an stuff ... nice to see that some of the older bodies are still getting "love" *lol*
     
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    Yes your right I'm still loving this 6yrs old slr but I'm also saving up to buy a new body( which will be a while, being a student) lol
     
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    reznap No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I don't really have any critique to offer, I think you're well past my level of skill/talent. Just wanted to say I like it!

    My favorites are 3 and 4.
     
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    #2, #4 and #5 are amazing. #5 is the first time I actually thought selective coloring adds something to the picture.

    #1 and #3 are also technically spot-on.
     
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    Thanks for the positive replies. How about the watermark is it intrusive or its ok?
     

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