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    Went outside today to take a couple of photos. Came out with this one and was just wondering, anything I could add-on to it? What would you guys do differently if you were taking this picture. Just need some advice and tell me what you think! Just a beginner at photography so I'm still learning. Thanks guys!

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    I like the subject matter, but I'm wondering why you turned the shot....also, if you decide to reformat, consider tighten the crop on the three glass figures. The background is blurred and your subjects need to stand out a bit more. What about darkening the background???
     
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    I did an edit if you're interested.....
     
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    Sure, post it up!


    @the picture- I noticed that it should have been aimed a little bit more up. Other than that though< I'm happy with it. The red and orange one could be a bit more in focus, but my ojective was to solely get the blue one focused.

    But yea, I'd like to see it edited, post it up!
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    OK.....

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    Looks good. I like it darkened like that. Was going for more of the tilt look to give it more effect. But it looks good either way to me. I like it! Thanks:)
     
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