New Beach Shoot (model) **Lots of Photos**

[MyaLover]

A few I took of a model named Holly. She was so much fun to work with. C&C please.

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[returnofa5i]

The photos seem to be under exposed. I also think the shots would have benefited from a reflector.

 

[kellylindseyphotography]

The photos seem to be under exposed. I also think the shots would have benefited from a reflector.

I agree. Though, totally fixable in PS. I like the poses you chose and everything.. just your conversions are flat and underexposed.

 

[tirediron]

Tell you what: I'll provide C&C if you provide her name and address!

Seriously, I agree with the others. The poses are great, but the conversions not so much. I'd say at least 1/2 stop brigher, and when you do your conversion, try setting black, white and midpoints and fine-tuning from there.

 

[Alpha]

#1 is your shot, hands down. You need to up the highlights but other than that it's perfect.

 

[Sw1tchFX]

too.much.middle.grey.

Other then that, they're great!

 

[MyaLover]

OK... I have lightened them up a bit. Sometimes you dont see things until others point them out, and then you do them, and its like "oh yeah thats better" Here they are:

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[H.M.]

OK... I have lightened them up a bit. Sometimes you dont see things until others point them out, and then you do them, and its like "oh yeah thats better" Here they are:

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Much better! Impressive even!
If the horizon were horizontal they would've been perfect...

 

[Renair]

Great poses, but careful with the composition, I think you cut off some body parts in shots where they would be better left in. Example, her hands in #1. #8 is my favourite as its a typical 'Bond Girl' pose.....

 

[MyaLover]

Thats what we thought after we looked at them... about the bond girl pose

 

[Fox Paw]

Very nice. The model is interesting and not just another pretty woman (not that there's anything wrong with that). Keep up the good work.

 

[MyaLover]

You guys can see the rest of the series on my flickr:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/morganboss/

 

[abraxas]

OK...
... its like "oh yeah thats better" ...

:thumbup:

 

[tirediron]

Much better! Impressive even!
If the horizon were horizontal they would've been perfect...

How did I miss a tilted horizon??????

 

[Alex_B]

much better!


now the only thing causing me pain is her back in #9 ...

i also missed the horizon, must be the girl distracting me