New Beach Shoot (model) **Lots of Photos**

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  1. MyaLover

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    A few I took of a model named Holly. She was so much fun to work with. C&C please.

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    The photos seem to be under exposed. I also think the shots would have benefited from a reflector.
     
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    I agree. Though, totally fixable in PS. I like the poses you chose and everything.. just your conversions are flat and underexposed.
     
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    Tell you what: I'll provide C&C if you provide her name and address! ;)

    Seriously, I agree with the others. The poses are great, but the conversions not so much. I'd say at least 1/2 stop brigher, and when you do your conversion, try setting black, white and midpoints and fine-tuning from there.
     
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    #1 is your shot, hands down. You need to up the highlights but other than that it's perfect.
     
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    too.much.middle.grey.

    Other then that, they're great!
     
  7. MyaLover

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    OK... I have lightened them up a bit. Sometimes you dont see things until others point them out, and then you do them, and its like "oh yeah thats better" Here they are:

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    Much better! Impressive even!
    If the horizon were horizontal they would've been perfect...
     
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    Great poses, but careful with the composition, I think you cut off some body parts in shots where they would be better left in. Example, her hands in #1. #8 is my favourite as its a typical 'Bond Girl' pose.....
     
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    Thats what we thought after we looked at them... about the bond girl pose
     
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    Very nice. The model is interesting and not just another pretty woman (not that there's anything wrong with that). Keep up the good work.
     
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