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  1. sparks

    sparks TPF Noob!

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    Hello, i just found this forum, I was looking for a place to get some advice about photograpy. I would like to post my photos to get some crtiques, but I don't know if I am in the right place. Please let me know if it's ok so i could post my photos :D
     
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    ABSOLUTELY :)
     
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    I'm with Rachel, Absolutley. Please do.
     
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    Well, then. I'll post my newest photos, and best from what think. Please note that i'mj just a beginner :mrgreen:
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    They are different as I am still trying to find the stile that fits me best
    Well, feel free to comment, sorry if they are too many, and really sorry for my mistakes, I'm not a native English speaker
    Edit: it looks that there's a problem with the phots, I can't seem to upload them all, I'll post some more in the morning:(
     
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    is that an egg? haha original!
     
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    the first two don't really do anything for me, composition wise.

    i like the 3rd one though :mrgreen:
     
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    Thank you :)
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    I am working on a series right now so stand by :D
     
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    Okay.

    Nice shot of an egg, but as others point out no:3 is good pose. But is that you yourself? Than did you shoot it with timer or someone else operate the camera? Also maybe because the snow reflection the skin colour look pale, or is that the correct tone?
     
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    When it's cold out, you tend to pale a bit :p

    The only suggestions/critiques I have is that with some, it appears you're trying to "make art". Instead, take pictures of what you like. Try to make it a mental snapshot if you can.

    Also, in pictures like your third shot in the first set, try to use a bit lower of an aperture value, it will make the subject appear to be more dominant in the shot and I think it gives a much better portrait, but that's all my opinion! :p
     
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    Ooh, thans for replying :D
    For passerby: No, that's not me, that's my best friend, and though she does have a pale skin, the picture in a little desaturated, and I also worked at the curves.
    CanAm, I will definetly take your advice :)
     
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    Hello...I'm back. More pictures, not really a series, but they kinda have the same subject. Im not entirely pleased with the quality but the lighting was awful. I'm getting my old (and better) camera this week so i'm expecting lots and lots of hopefully better photos. :D

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